Hummer

Hummer perches 'pon pear Scratches looks all around Cat spies tiny feathered treat Too small

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/10/2013 1:49:00 PM

Love hummingbirds,,,, nicely done,,, thank you for liking my Beauty of Poetry, I'm not really sure I like it ;}

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/27/2013 12:02:00 PM

Nice job done here. Loved always, bl

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/27/2013 11:01:00 AM

I sit hours looking at them how they suck nectar. cats can hardly get a chance. Nice poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2013 8:27:00 PM

awe, Sara,,,, hope the cat doesn't' get the treat... enjoyed~ Linda

Robert Johnson

Date: 5/26/2013 3:24:00 PM

The cat better be careful, those whiskers would get hacked right off by those wings.

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/26/2013 1:38:00 PM

This is a spectacular write my friend! I am enthralled by the magnificence of this enormously wonderful poem this afternoon! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/26/2013 12:54:00 PM

descriptive verse so visually delightful, sara.. you flow on and on... spledid write!..:) huggs

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 5/26/2013 6:02:00 AM

A beautiful piece.