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Human Noise

I see city dwellers resting on concrete seats Day dreaming a thought or two The fragrance of coffee wafting out into the street Here’s to the situated sparrow poking and jumping about Searching for his daily opportunity Honking cars and fuming buses some filled with people, some without All moving quickly with a purpose to somewhere The city is buzzing about at cool summer 78 degrees Red lights, green lights an old man afoot singing to himself unaware Just think of what he’s seen in a lifetime Buildings coming down and sky scrappers going up Constant motion and change and crime Kids on skateboards with I-pods in their ears Dial up phones to cell phones in everyone’s hands I wondered if he had a humming in his head throughout these years? Or was he busy in the past reading books he’d already read? Isn’t interesting all the commotion mankind makes While a small bird eats the crumbs from a piece of old bread

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/6/2009 5:43:00 AM
Yes our surroundings and distractions are so great but this is what makes for great poetry..catch the moment and write..Awesome job.
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Date: 7/31/2009 3:48:00 PM
a beautiful write that captures so many different scenes of life and dedication to daily living. especially the ones so many take for granted and never think about but you delivered within these words,,Blessings..Cecil and Thank you for taking the time to read and comment upon my words..
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Date: 7/31/2009 9:10:00 AM
Great imagery here, Laura ... you've really captured the city view ... might want to fix the second stanza, line 3 to "honking" i.e. an "n" instead of a "c" ... smile ...
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Date: 7/28/2009 3:40:00 PM
Kool poem Laura, i wonder how many individual sounds there are on any given day on the streets>>James
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Date: 7/25/2009 11:42:00 AM
wow and you say my poem was good, this is amazing
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Date: 7/24/2009 7:40:00 AM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 7/24/2009 5:24:00 AM
Spot on my dear friend. Fantastic writing. Did I hear a fly? Love ,Carol
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Date: 7/24/2009 4:51:00 AM
it shows the real situation in cities especially when they are full of people. Really people make noise
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Date: 7/23/2009 6:59:00 PM
A good write,Laura about city dwellers and the nature that live there too, God bless Moses
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Date: 7/23/2009 5:59:00 PM
Love this Laura.....how nature ignores the chaos around it....and carries on! Well done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/23/2009 3:44:00 PM
I love it...I often think about what our grandchildren will think about and what noise they will be making. BG
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Date: 7/23/2009 12:45:00 PM
This poetry is fantastic Laura ! I'm a city boy the most of mine life,..and you captured this quite well,.TY for this one !!! james
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