How To Be Me

Four friends meet to share their most intimate details of life. But who knows what we hold back from each other? Ashamed of our secrets -- afraid that what we say will leave us alone again. Just like before when we had our innocence stolen.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/13/2012 3:04:00 AM

A sad but well written poem Don - Now, as Christmas approached, I also wish you a nice and peaceful Christmas. - Great Santa Claus hug from me to you / / Anne-Lise :)

Holly Moore

Date: 12/12/2012 7:16:00 PM

"Afraid that what we say, will leave us alone."....know that feeling...Nice write..I'm pretty sure your form is "Free Verse." Hugs, Holly Moore

Jack Ellison

Date: 12/12/2012 5:34:00 PM

Sometimes it's necessary to hold back! The truth doesn't always need to be told! A well written piece my friend, Jack