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How they see us from afar

How they see us from afar. 
I saw a planet it was blue,
It had a white tip. and a bottom one too.
The people here are funny lot, 
Some like to kill, and some do.
Others destroy, thinking properties a toy.
They can create, so much good.
But they also build killing type stuff.
Tanks, and  Mortars, and torture chambers for you.
But hey all so build hospitals too,
What a strange bunch .we see from afar.
They fight and quarrel, for the common good.
Then take their wondered, to be loved.
Oh what miss understood, bunch these are, 
I’m  glad were looking from afar.
Life on the planet must be mad, 
Not knowing,  if your happy or sad.
Look at that place over there!
Stay away, stay clear!
Let god our lord, sort them out.
He’s the only one with such clout,
Maybe he can sort them out.

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  1. Date: 2/3/2013 12:55:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Gary xx

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 7:29:00 PM
    Gary,Congratulations on a job well done. Enjoyed the cute and beautiful baby poems. I hope you do not mind that I embraced the amusement of this contest with my 13 year old son. Always and forever ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 12:30:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup Gary hope you enjoy your stay here

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 8:54:00 AM
    Hi welcome to poetry soup this poem is good xxx

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:57:00 AM
    Hi there and welcome to the site, I hope you enjoy it here.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 1:49:00 AM
    a philosophers look at the world.... nice to see passion and humor! 'we fight and quarrel for the common good' nice line

    phoenix Avatar gary phoenix
    Date: 1/8/2013 4:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you. for you kind words.