How Sad

A shadow upon life- makes us seek the shade

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Sean Kelly

Date: 12/31/2008 1:10:00 AM

Yes indeed , Brian , You nailed this , as EVER .... Check your Soup-mail ....

James Foulk

Date: 8/15/2008 12:53:00 PM

sometimes that is only place to go. this was a warm, refreshing poem.

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/15/2008 6:10:00 AM

To say you have a way with words would just not be right. To say you have a talent beyond compare would be more like it. This is a favorite beyond a doubt. One I can relate to very well, as I am sure many can. Brilliant. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/15/2008 4:07:00 AM

this is very profound, Brian - i love it. So true, and yes, it is so sad...I find myself there, quite often. We must outshine it! Love Kristin