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How Much Longer Will It Go On

He was the child that did not smile, or live or breath, towards his death he did not look as though he had the time to duck and dive he was taught to live or die by the book Bruised and battered in a dishevelled state hiding in corners wrapped only in tears he, deprived of love, a child they did hate starved of food, under the stairs, hiding fears Then justice stepped in and took him away to a home full of love, fun and laughter in that tormented life he could not stay as one so young he could not look after He grew into a man without a care Adopted a child, saved them from despair. ©1/3/2014 Shackled Deprived of freedom then held as a slave mental torture, in every race and creed trapped in a void, while trying to be brave inside looking out, a broken heart bleeds Tormented, abused, while home is their jail shunned by a partner and tainted with lies no contact with friends including no mail then pushed to the brink each day they despise Whispered sweet nothings, then captured by love charmed to the alter, their vows they both read the cracks appear, as does a boxing glove sentenced to life for an innocent deed With prayer and patience they will be released A living hell at the hands of a beast. 1/3/2014 Note* This is a double sonnet. I used the same title for both as these despicable crimes can happen to anyone of any age in any country and we should not close our eyes to the fact that it could be happening in our neighbourhood to people we know…

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Date: 10/10/2022 9:54:00 AM
Really wrenching story, if you think you've had It hard you must consider again David.'
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Date: 12/20/2014 7:18:00 AM
This is so terribly sad, David. My daughter works as a correctional officer at a prison; I'm sure she has seen this many times. Keep well...Merry Christmas! Mikki
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Date: 8/1/2014 10:38:00 PM
David These poems are very heartbreaking and deep. So real and raw with truth and emotion that touches the reader in an honest way. Thank you for the great comment on my My Advice poem
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Date: 6/30/2014 10:14:00 PM
Something like this happened here where I live. A little boy 6 years old was found in a closet starving. He weight less then 20 pounds. He was saved, his stepmother and father are in jail. His stepbrother found him. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 6/3/2014 1:07:00 PM
Very powerful and sadly true write, David.. Thank you for bringing attention to the fact that these things are happening all the time and we should all do our part to help any way we can... Arlene...
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Date: 5/22/2014 9:34:00 AM
Hi David-- great writes on two subjects that are close to my heart. Man's inhumanity to man or child make me so very angry. I am a professional Counselor specializing in child play therapy. Sometimes, I just want to go out there and take justice into my own hands with the way these innocent children are abused. Xx~Xx
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Date: 5/21/2014 10:22:00 AM
Hi David, Wanted to stop by and say hello to you. I found this and I'm so very glad I did. I'm grateful to you kind one~ for writing this. It touched my eyes and my life. It is so very true my friend. These words need to be plastered on the billboards of every town and every city. Globally in every language. Thank you. Thank you for sharing this incredible write with us. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/20/2014 5:42:00 PM
Fantastic write! Evil exists where it may. Too many people avert their eyes to that which they feel they have no ability to change. Evil must be opposed at every turn... and with every weapon we have at our disposal.
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Date: 5/17/2014 7:03:00 AM
Excellent, heartfelt and very informative. You're so brilliant, David.
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Date: 5/14/2014 5:39:00 AM
great great write.. :) eye opener and probing.. keep the writer be on guard.... , what happen to your other poems.. :O, olive GBU
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Date: 5/13/2014 8:04:00 PM
gosh, did you take this one down and then put it back up again? I sure do remember it. Very powerful message. and how neat that you used double sonnet! (I think Dave Wood is also really into making folks aware of these kinds of atrocities and trying to stop them in the world)
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Date: 5/11/2014 12:33:00 PM
Dear David, Hello, old friend. I may be coming to England in October and would love to meet you. Your sonnets are awesome! I'm so glad the boy in the first one was adopted and then chose to "Pay It Forward" by adopting a son. Discrimination I cannot tolerate, so your first sonnet scored big in my heart. Being a prisoner of love is no fun either. Sending you hugs, Carolyn (I'll Soup Mail you my email address.)
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Date: 5/10/2014 12:29:00 PM
That is a wonderful well written sonnets.. I am in awe.. I am interested... I want to write sonnets.. Brooke
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Date: 5/6/2014 3:29:00 AM
How wonderfully you brought these evils to light, David...or is it Dave? I'm confused! ;)
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Date: 5/1/2014 7:20:00 PM
Bro, these are excellent writes so full of emotions.Well done! Hugs
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Date: 4/23/2014 5:12:00 PM
One message but on two fab writes that go together hand in hand. Hugs Jan
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Date: 4/21/2014 2:41:00 PM
It's easy to forget that children live through nightmares all the time. Very Well Done, David. Hope you've been well!...Caleb
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:32:00 PM
Hi there David, great write, and a 2 for 1 special!!!! Loved it. What happened to all your other poems? Hope all is well with you, and Happy Easter!!!
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Date: 4/18/2014 11:34:00 PM
So beautifully written David, filled with empathy and understanding. Mahalo
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Date: 4/12/2014 5:40:00 PM
Eloquently expressed and sad tales.
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Date: 4/5/2014 1:23:00 PM
These are eye openers indeed-- sometimes, we tend to get lost in our comfort zones, we fail to see the horror other people are experiencing... thank you for shedding light on these conditions that some people are in-- hopefully those who are in it remain strong, and can be beacons of light to others-- I am hoping you are well, David, so nice to hear from you and so cool how that story is true...
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Date: 4/2/2014 10:11:00 PM
Two powerful pieces with great messages.
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Date: 3/28/2014 9:56:00 AM
Hello David, :(.....xox~ Linda
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Date: 3/26/2014 2:57:00 AM
A re-post I think. Two great, powerful poems. That has been quite a clean out you've had here.
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Date: 3/22/2014 12:24:00 PM
Two very caring and thoughtful poems. I enjoyed reading both of them.
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