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How Could You

How could you tell me you love me And then take it all away?! It makes no sence You make NO sence... You can not love someone And then say...sorry not anymore... No...it doesn't work like that Love is supposed to be a partnership If you didn'nt love me then... Why did you put me through so much pain like you did It's not fair to me It's not fair to you... So you can have your "Fairytale ending" with whoever your with now... And when my time comes, I'm gonna rub it in your face...

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John Freeman

Date: 12/2/2011 10:15:00 AM

Don't waste your time on revenge Elizabeth, it only defaces your own love. Congratulations on your worthy 2nt place. Agape, Moses

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/1/2011 8:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Letdown contest Elizabeth

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/1/2011 6:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest Elizabeth. You all left a piece of yourselves on this contest page. It was so very hard to judge. I am asking you all to read and comment on all the winners here. You will go away seeing into the hearts of all the winners. This was a very emotional contest for me. Thank you all for supporting this contest. Love and blessing to you all, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/7/2010 6:32:00 PM

Sometimes if you just not try hard it might come to you. I put myself back to different times in my life to write from. I know that doesn't help but only way I shake it. Try just not thinking so hard. Thanks for the nice blog comment, made me smile. With love Michael

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/7/2010 3:15:00 PM

Hey sweetheart, I did a blog on here... I mentioned you but not by name... just wanted to share that..and thank you for all your nice comments....love to you always Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 12:22:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Elizabeth. Hope to be reading it for a long time to come. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 12:54:00 PM

I'm truly sorry you are going through this sadness in your life. I wish I say something magical that can make it go away... writing does help a little... you have my love and concern....love Michael