How Could I Ever Forgive You

How could i ever forget the pain 
i felt for what you did
A tear drop falling from my eye
then finally Hitting my chest like
pistols  

I wish i could forgive you
But ''i'm sorry'' seems so plain
Breaking free of all the lies
And betrayal seemed futile
Because love has trapped me 
with you
Like quicksand slowly sucking me
As i uselessly try to escape

Its too late for the meaningless
apologies
Said at the fear of losing me,
Taking euphemisms to the next
level.

How could i ever forgive you
You ripped my soul
I could never forgive you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/5/2012 7:44:00 AM
Aww!...very deep Ronny.
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:45:00 PM
Sharing these trials helps lighten the load Ronny, we all seem to go through them but then there is light at the end of the tunnel. Hope you have rached that place. Such an emotional write. Lizzy
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Date: 4/30/2012 4:09:00 PM
Love is sometime painful.....very well written Ronny. - You will find love again. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/30/2012 12:46:00 PM
Hurt and pain is easy to feel with this write Ronny!!...Be strengthened in the Lord, my friend...Forgiveness is a foundation which cannot be ignored...Love Diana
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Date: 4/30/2012 12:57:00 PM
thank you. Diana i wrote this at a dark time. And i thought why not share it with my fellow souperz
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