Hot Stuff

How come I never looked like Hot Stuff in a sundress?
My sundresses by comparison look anemic and shapeless
My figure is not what it used to be (it is hopeless)
It’s fallen down, spread out and looks a trifle excessive
Hot Stuff’s figure is lush, provocative and caressive
Her sundress is stylish, vivid and really expensive
My secondhand garb lacks style and are oppressive
Maybe a sundress worn at seventy-five is not impressive 
Whereas, Hot Stuff’s body and dress are “in your face” aggressive
Am I too hard on myself, too critical and depressive?
Let’s face it; I’ll never look like Hot Stuff in a sundress
Just thinking about it makes me manic-depressive
Hot Stuff’s look is suggestive and expressive
Whereas mine is age-regressive and inexpressive
I never looked like Hot Stuff in retrospect
Yet we all have “our day” in one way or another, I suspect
I had mine so it’s time to step back and reflect
(Kindly!) on our replacements without resentment
Wishing them splendor in the sun without impediment.


“The Sundress”
Carol Zic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 6:06 AM
Congratulation's on your fine win Carol in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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April 4, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Wonderful write with nice rhyming!Congrats on your win---kashinath
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April 4, 2011 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations on your win Carol in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol
K. Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 6:57 PM
Hmm I think "Hot Stuff" wouldn't hold a candle to your charm & wit though, Carol! I think the zest within is what would make you hot stuff yourself ;) Congrats on your win :)
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April 3, 2011 at 6:24 PM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Carol
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April 3, 2011 at 6:06 PM
Congrats Carol on your wonderful win in the sundress contest luv.. with this awesome write and entry .. wonderful write .. enjoy your top ten win with luv..
Brown Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 7:08 AM
I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Carol the best to you in Constance's contest. Love, Carol
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March 23, 2011 at 7:04 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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March 23, 2011 at 2:10 PM
hot and now im full of smiles.. sure enjoyed Carol, bright... take care,..p.d.
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