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Hostess twinkies

.     The yellow cream filled twinkie
               A frozen delight,
        Try eating it nice and cold;
             Tongue enveloping
               Tonsil tackling
                Throat filling

{throw them in the freezer before you eat them}

inspired by:

sweet treat contest (Laura Mckenzie)

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  1. Date: 9/14/2009 12:42:00 PM
    Yummy, yummy Abe>>James

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 5:50:00 PM
    Sounds Devilishly yummy, I love twinkies but never had em frozen, might have to give it a try..Great Epulaeryu...GB Always, Tyesha

  1. Date: 4/2/2009 5:37:00 PM
    Okay I hate twinkies but I can already tell Im going to buy a stupid box of them. Hey have you ever tried one deep fried? Seriously can't believe frozen sponge cake is going to be good.

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 6:09:00 PM
    YUMMY WRITE ABE, GOOD LUCK................DM

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 3:59:00 PM
    yummy,i just need to try it out,sounds delicious

  1. Date: 3/29/2009 9:59:00 AM
    Mouth watering lines. Nice job and good luck.

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 11:33:00 PM
    I like the method, I'm going to have to try this. Great job.

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 12:11:00 PM

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 2:55:00 AM
    Twinkies are the bomb, you wrote a great poem. I hope you win something. Tyler

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 1:50:00 PM
    Thanks for you comment on my Pisces write. Encouragement is always appreciated. I have entered it into the contest as you suggested. I also entered the food Epulaeryu contest. I must admit, I'm a little jealous of yours....It made me want twinkies right now!!! Great job!

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 9:34:00 AM
    los of fun, Abe! good job! thanks for comments, Jim

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 5:12:00 AM
    I'm going to try it! It sound tempting. Good job, Abe. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 9:01:00 PM
    Yummy, Abe!

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 4:22:00 PM have me wanting to eat one haha....great job and good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 4:11:00 PM
    The twinkies have it brother and so does this piece.. best wishes in the contest.

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 3:27:00 PM
    Gotta love the Great write!

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 2:14:00 PM
    Nice equlaeryu, you must like twinkies. I don't really care for them, but there is a lot of people I know that does like them. Good job keep it up. Love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 11:39:00 AM
    Great "taste"

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 11:23:00 AM
    Mmm...delicious write Abe...Raul

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 11:10:00 AM
    great write Mr. L!!! Im craving twinkies!!!