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''Horse Drawn Dreams''

Daddy bought me a filly named ''Champagne Taste''. Smitten by the thought someday she would race. Slender,sleek,course mane. Shaped as elegant as a European statuette. I trained,coached her every move. Her strength with age continued to improve. Thoroughbred beauty,your lifetime of wins. Memories still remain in our trophy case. Beloved horse I could never replace. ''A Horse Story'' Poetry Contest sponsored by...Carol Brown

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Carol Eastman

Date: 7/29/2011 10:37:00 AM

Interesting write that brings so many images to mind. Well done.

John Freeman

Date: 6/28/2011 1:43:00 PM

Kacey, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses

James Foulk

Date: 6/27/2011 12:04:00 PM

love horses, my dad had one it was pure black except for this white mark by his nose, beautiful horse. loved horse racing i use to go a lot. you must have been proud. and congratons. on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2011 8:30:00 PM

Oh, yes, the beautiful "imagined" horse! I sure remember this poem and congratulations, my friend.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/23/2011 4:47:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Kacey. Excellent piece. Great write. Ralph

Jack Horne

Date: 6/23/2011 2:36:00 PM

Many congrats on your win, Kacey: )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/23/2011 1:45:00 PM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Kacey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/23/2011 12:57:00 PM

Congrats Kacey on your excellent win in the horse contest with this exciting entry luv.. great adventure of fond memories..enjoy..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/23/2011 12:26:00 PM

Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Kacey. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/12/2011 5:24:00 AM

Awwwww. How sweet this horse named Champagne Taste. Carol will surely enjoy your entry here, Kaycee..Used to have a lil pet horse named Snack Pack...a dapple gray....they are the most magnificent of creatures! Enjoyed reading your work here this morning. Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/30/2011 10:09:00 AM

such a lovely poem and a lovely name for this grand horse Kacey.. excellent visual so vibrant luv..good luck in the contest.. appreciate your wonderful critique on my entry too ...enjoy..

Cory Long

Date: 5/28/2011 5:13:00 PM

This is well written I have enjoyed your poem tonight. cory

Kacey Greenlee
Date: 5/28/2011 6:41:00 PM

Thanks Cory.You never know what you are gonna get from me hehe.I'll be reading your stuff soon my dear...Kacey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2011 4:01:00 PM

It sounds like a true story. You had such a horse? I wish I had one to write about. I have no horse tales to tell!! You did wonderfully with yours!

Kacey Greenlee
Date: 5/28/2011 4:39:00 PM

No,not a true story.But was inspired because I had always dreamed of a horse like the one I described.I know how you feel having not had a real horse.Oh well we have our imaginations...Thanks for the comment Andrea.Sincerely,Kacey