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Horse Deal

Horse Deal A very rich Rancher from the North goes down to Mexico. He takes a drive out on the Country sight. He sees a young boy bathing and combing a beautiful horse. He asks the boy how much he wanted for the horse. The boy said - this horse not for sale. The man says - why not? The boy says - he do not lookie too good. The man says - I make you a deal and give you $300.00 the boy says no. The man says - I give you $500.00 The boy says OK, but he do not lookie too good. The man says - he looks mighty fine to me. He gives him the money and asks him to help him get on the horse. The boy did, but the horse trips and the man falls. He than tells the boy - why didn't you tell me, this horse was blind. The boy says - I did. I told you - he did not lookie too good.... 07/07/2013 For Andrea's contest Show Me The Funny

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  1. Date: 7/29/2014 3:00:00 AM
    I guess the rancher should have learned the boy's language before buying. Cute story, Lucilla. I enjoyed it.... Robert.

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 7/29/2014 9:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading. God bless
  1. Date: 4/16/2014 2:41:00 AM
    i love this Lucy, my father lives in a rich ranch... how many times, he's fallen I'll never know... xox...Linda -- --------------- --------------- (((This is a copy paste note to every poet, PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE A REPLY ON THIS COMMENT. I'm not being rude, 95% of the time, I never come back to read the reply you left on my comment. i HAVE MY SOUP E-MAIL NOTIFICATION OFF :-( If for some reason, you want to give thanks. Let's do it the old fashion way. Drop by and read one of my poems, or send the thanks through soup mail, or just enjoy my visit. As I would yours. I don't enjoy comments on comment's. It takes away from every poet, One day Poetry Soup Will See it.... Have yourself a lovely day.)))

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 9:21:00 AM
    Beautiful fact worded in poem. Lovely done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 2:32:00 PM
    LOL Lucy, I like the lookie of this write lol. Cleverly done . Remind not to buy a horse off this kid lol. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 4:49:00 AM
    I am howling with laughter!!...What a gem this is my friend!...You should write a book of jokes...Hands down winner - Tim

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 5:06:00 AM
    ha ha, what fun ! I like it much, Lucilla!!

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 5:03:00 AM
    Interesting one. Nicely done. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 9:08:00 AM
    Awww! Ha. :) Poor horse. This was really charming. Nicely done, Lucilla!

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 9:25:00 PM
    A sad tale. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 6:19:00 PM
    Ha ha, this is certainly a clever write for Andrea's contest! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a brilliantly funny piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 6:08:00 PM
    Cute one..I got a chuckle..Several chuckles a day keeps the doctor away..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 5:16:00 PM
    As always a very well written story / poem Lucilla.- Luck in contest. - Sad to hear that you are not fully recovered yet, but am glad that things are getting better. - I've been on vacation (without network access for 2 1/2 week / read my blog.) / / oxox Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 1:21:00 PM
    Good one, my dear. You made me chuckle! Hugs! Thanks for your visit to my work....I'm sure someone is already sitting in your heart and he doesn't need to climb in through the window....

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 12:58:00 PM
    I've heard this one before Lucilla but it is still funny and a pleasure to re-hear especially from you, you lookie pretty good to me, Stay Well My Friend xxx