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Homemade Salsa

Tomatoes fried whole till dark Peppers friend with them With cilantro and onion Now blend this great mix Add a little salt My mouth now Craves Written by Wayland Bunch 2/1/2013 Ok I like experimenting but this form is a little too forced. I have syllable count and content already decided. It was trying experiment anyway and a learning experience.

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Date: 3/12/2013 3:01:00 PM
I saw this form before and wanted to try it out, but I never gave it a shot. It's interesting to say the least, but you're right about it being kinda limited. But it's good for you to experiment anyway, because (even if in a very small way) it will inevitably help you with your writing!
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