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His Will

Months and months we tried and tried, wishing to conceive
what great joy we felt to find our prayers were received. 

Day by day we planned and waited for the time to come
when we would have a new born a daughter or a son.

Three months of sun, a pale green room, a crib by the wall
crocheted blankets and Teddy bears laying in the hall.

Then sorrow came with blood and pain, a baby lost
you see, not to be, my little girl her life was our cost.

I would not relive the day, though I dream it still
perhaps at heavens gates she'll be, oh, I hope she will.

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  1. Date: 2/10/2014 4:24:00 PM
    Nice ! nice ! DG. congrats.. I WOULDN'T want to relive this either. Loving it ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 11:09:00 PM
    Really a good re - telling of a sad experience. Is it true or are you just making up some fiction. I hope the latter. Anyway keep it up! Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 3:40:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work with this great emotive work..Many women out there have experienced this great loss..Sara

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 5:17:00 PM
    I sincerely hope this was from your imagination. either way know that a tear was shed for this emotional piece. You wrote it with great tenderness and gave it a hopeful glow.

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 9:36:00 PM
    Congratulation for a fine win in the contest. enjoyed the poem, debbie

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 9:00:00 AM
    She has always been there Debbie, Watching from the gates. Congrats on this wonderful poem....Hugs....Roger

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 9:16:00 AM
    Debbie You carefully and tenderly tread on the horror of parents' to be worst nightmare. Xx oo

  1. Date: 12/30/2013 4:52:00 PM
    Dear poet; being the soul who has lost two little ones, the inflammation in mine throat has once again threatened the depths of mine heart reading this write of yours. How can this soul, encourage such a soul as yourself as to the reuniting of the soul you pine for? I'll pray, for true; with the faith I possess, and you yourself remember the mustard seed ! Have a blessed New Year dear poet....much love, james

  1. Date: 12/30/2013 11:42:00 AM
    well i have to emulate tps here, Debbie,, this is truly beautiful, in its shroud of sadness,,, you truly are an wondrous human being....

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 11:14:00 PM
    You are awesome!

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 7:19:00 PM
    a very poignant write, and one i can relate to, though i have 3 healthy children, i know the pain of losing my last's something that haunts, sorry for your loss and i am sure she will greet you when the time comes :) Hugs

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 5:38:00 PM
    Oh she will definately be there Debbie,with open arms and a joyful smile to greet you, then take you by the hand to see the Lord, a day to look forward too for sure, fabulous write,blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 5:00:00 PM
    Beautiful write Debbie although it brought much sadness to my heart. Very nicely written...peter

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 3:05:00 PM
    She will! I feel and have experienced your hurt. Reunion will come and that's worth looking forward to. God bless you sweet Debbie...your friend, chuck

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 12:10:00 PM
    Hi Debbie, A very poignant and sensitive write with much spirituality.. Ken

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 5:31:00 AM
    Yes, she is there for she was an innocent soul..Reads like a winner in the contest..Great topic chosen for many women have gone through this ...Thanks for the visits to my page..Your comments are appreciated..Sara

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 11:44:00 PM
    A touching poem, Debs. It's nice to see you talking about heaven. I sincerely believe there is some place all our souls have to end up!

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 10:11:00 PM
    I believe she will...I really do...God bless Debbie...I'm going to work on that other poem as soon as my sister leaves after new years..:-) have a great one..

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 9:29:00 PM
    This poem is one of those which tugs so hard at our heartstrings. It is almost too painful to read. This was surely not an easy subject to write about. I admire your bravery for doing so. Well done, Debbie...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I really do appreciate it!

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 6:47:00 PM
    A sad poem here, hard to say anything except so so sorry my friend, cheri and thank you for your comment must forgive my short comment here for i am not feeling all that well myself, i am home with walking phomenon so if i may read this again later ok and than i'll give you a better reading ok.