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His Sapling Lemon Tree

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His Sapling Lemon Tree

Nothing unusual blossomed this spring, yet, I marvel at the growth of her resilience ~ In morning's half-light I watch her fondle branches, then, smile, reassured.... It makes my eyes if burned by the fruit's tangy juice ~ He would have been pleased to know three lovely lemons survived winter's frost
__________________________________________ KIMO-TANKA-SENRYU For Constance's Contest: Three Verses

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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 10:14:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 6:16:00 AM
    Ahhh, sweet Carrie, the way you toy with form makes me disgusted with my meager rhymes and treasure the work of artists like you. Your pen and ink can be so delightfully flippant at times. I just can't help loving you.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:51:00 PM
    wow, this is fantastic, Carrie. Very well deserved win.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Lovely and Nice piece of poetry,written by a dexterous poet..Kudos to you,dear friend ..Congrats on your well deserved win....

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 2:10:00 PM
    Carrie congratulation on your wonderful win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 7:10:00 PM
    A hard task to make 3 stand alone verses that also can be read together! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 6:47:00 PM
    Heart felt and lovely. Congrats. BG

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 3:55:00 PM
    wow Carrie, I enjoyed the imagery, congrats. Rick

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 1:40:00 PM
    congrats Carrie, a very symbolic poem loved it xxx

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 12:49:00 PM
    Lots of sentiment here. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 7:03:00 AM
    Beautiful verse here Carrie.Loved it.

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:32:00 PM
    Ahh!! This is a great one..Enjoyed reading the fruity work..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:02:00 PM
    This stung my eyes--if this is about your daughter it couldn't be more perfect--if this is beyond metaphor and really true and he did plant the tree before...well...what can I say! And if it's totally fiction you have made it true!

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 5:01:00 PM
    i love the ending! lovely poem...

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 3:43:00 PM
    this is just gorgeous Carrie! good luck in the,Deb

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 2:58:00 PM
    This is definitely a winner. Good luck in the contest