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His Ode

Slinking away a gaze in silent distress, by that guarding railings, a light it descends her mind it flounders in self made heaven swarms around that verity clean shaven. Sultry dusk marks again an end, of whimpering yearns in their flawless defend his allure ode always in aloft through entangled vines a place they sought. Bygones and blood relations, they forsaken but oh not a fiddle of reluctance it given it's not wrong to deem the slightest barriers she breaks to the furthest. Dispiriting clouds enshrouds her in twilight, his scenic visage twirls around in silhouette, ages she will dwell in that eternal solace, immense love brim full, were they ever realised? Hopes glimmer beyond horizons afar, and lingers not a qualm of what destined for, beguiled always in his limpid purity, like trellis his arms, she buries in felicity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 8/9/2011 8:48:00 PM
Congratulations, Suhana, your elegant poem has won the first round. Wish you success in the finals. -Mohammad
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Suhana. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:47:00 AM
Suhana, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/22/2009 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations, Suhana on this write being a "first round survivor" ... smile ... and good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Suhana. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2008 3:52:00 PM
Wow!!! A great write Suhana. Your deep thought are manifested in your poem. Heartiest congratulations on the poem being featured this week. It is a well earned feature. Mohammad
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Date: 11/3/2008 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations Suhana on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/3/2008 5:45:00 AM
Suhana - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 11/3/2008 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Suhana. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2008 5:30:00 PM
Much to think about here. I like the idea of hope glimmering beyond the horizons. Such a peaceful thought. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/2/2008 4:58:00 PM
Congratulations Suhana on "His Ode" being featured. Vince
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