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His Eyes

His eyes are a cup of warm coffee With swirls like soft chocolate notes Deep like the ocean without a trace of blue Hiding secrets and emotions too; His eyes are chopped mint leaves Adding a color like no other The clover color touches the hearts Of all who dare to seek it out; His eyes are golden flecks That sparkle with every breath they take A topaz color like clean jewelry Scattered among the darkness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/2/2013 6:25:00 PM
Nice work! It is very visual! I particularly love the line: "Deep like the ocean without a trace of blue"
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Sydney Poole
Date: 4/3/2013 5:47:00 AM
Thank you! This is based on someone i know and i tried to get in the details that i see when i look into his eyes

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