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His Eyes

His eyes are a cup of warm coffee
With swirls like soft chocolate notes
Deep like the ocean without a trace of blue
Hiding secrets and emotions too;

His eyes are chopped mint leaves
Adding a color like no other
The clover color touches the hearts 
Of all who dare to seek it out;

His eyes are golden flecks
That sparkle with every breath they take
A topaz color like clean jewelry
Scattered among the darkness.

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  1. Date: 4/2/2013 6:25:00 PM
    Nice work! It is very visual! I particularly love the line: "Deep like the ocean without a trace of blue"

    Poole Avatar Sydney Poole
    Date: 4/3/2013 5:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! This is based on someone i know and i tried to get in the details that i see when i look into his eyes