Hidden

They take from their God Serenity, Peace, and Justice I give that back to mine Their masks disguise them Allegiance therefore binds them True love then blinds them Temples crumble harsh Angels trumpet loudly now Facades lifting off Demons bare in light Naked breathing fire lashing Truth shields the penitent

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2012 7:29:00 PM

This is a strong one, Tim!!! I enjoyed this. WEll, I think you are my last comment for the night. Time for other things now. See ya, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2012 12:50:00 AM

Tim, wow... this comes from the power of ones mind...i like the perception in your mind... deep. ... always..pd

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/12/2012 9:40:00 PM

Wow Tim, this is truly a magnificent write my friend! It's nice to see you back again, we missed you while you were away! This is a tremendous poem that you have written! I thought highly of the second senryu as that flows better and where its message is portrayed very well! Thanks for sharing your poem that you have written for us all! I really enjoyed your write that I have read this evening! Great Work!