Hey What Can I Say

I know this will sound like I'm full of myself.
I'm really quite a stud.
The other night I stole a girl away from some poor dud.
I sauntered up and had my way and oooh, I tell you what.
I gave it to her good and straight and deep down from the gut.
She didn't resist when I grabbed her wrist.
And pinned her in the hall.
But then I woke like some cruel joke.
I'm not a stud at all.

9/27
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 10/24/2012 7:37:00 AM
Hey What can I say, Robert: I'm getting broke from this Unguided Tour around your garage sale!Your Black Diamond is too much high price for me and I'm getting back some other day when I am rich enough to have it. See you later. You can already tell Andrea Dietrich that I got her portrait on my wall...lol Hanitra
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Date: 10/11/2012 9:12:00 AM
Wello, sometimes it doesn't pay to wake up, I've been there too. On the other hand it's only your opinion and that doesn't always count! :) Love Lizzie
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Date: 10/10/2012 12:12:00 PM
Was looking to see if you had something new...I still really like this !!
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Date: 10/9/2012 8:27:00 PM
Nicely written as it is entertaining reading.
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Date: 10/2/2012 3:51:00 PM
Haha. This is cool:)
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Date: 10/1/2012 8:55:00 AM
Hey, I am back here trying to catch up. Where is a new poem??
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Date: 9/29/2012 1:50:00 PM
Been there... done that! What a disappointment eh! LOL Great write... cheers!
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Date: 9/27/2012 7:09:00 PM
This is a GREAT way to do a dream poem. They can be so many kinds. and the title for this is perfect!!
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Date: 9/27/2012 6:19:00 PM
i love the rhyme and rhythm of this poem and i like the ending - nice one!
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Date: 9/27/2012 4:09:00 PM
lol LOVE THIS !! In my dreams I am always sooo thin and beautiful..then I wake up lol This is really a cute poem, thanks for the smile and yes I laughed out loud and still smiling !!
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