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Here She Stands

Here she stands in the rain In the mist of it all Tryin to figure out What went wrong How did she end up With so much grief Why was she left in the rain With all of this pain Here she stands in the rain Wondering why She has no friends No dad Just a mom and siblings Why her Why all this pain Here she stands in the rain Waitin for a friend....

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Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 1/3/2009 10:53:00 PM

Breana, this was beautifully written and delicately expressed, this brought tears to my eyes, It made me really think, that we are not alone suffering. So many of us are going through, and keeping it inside but it's best to let it out, so then you can start to heal. Breana you are so young and brave, I know adults that are afraid of revealing themselves, but anyone that writes with the passion that you do and expressing yourself with truth and all that is within, Is Truly Amazing....tyesha

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/31/2008 10:16:00 AM

Breana this is just heartbreaking, but beautifully expressed. you say exact;y whats on your heart, hiding nothing, I like that. Blessings, ~Michaela~

Yasmin Ilahi

Date: 12/31/2008 7:42:00 AM

Aother grt one. Keep them coming.

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/30/2008 9:02:00 PM

beautiful, and thats no sooth saying when a young person can write and really is good. your getting better by the months. thank you for sharing

Lisa Cooper

Date: 12/30/2008 8:02:00 PM

very sad and poinant thank you for sharing such a lovely pen

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/30/2008 7:35:00 PM

Breana this is a heart breaker - Keep your hopes up as they say it can only get better - God Bless, MJ

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/30/2008 5:46:00 PM

Aww, this is so sad and lonely. Hope it is not about you. If it is, hang in there. Good things come to good people. Wishing you great joy in the new year. Love, Shar