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Here She Stands

Here she stands in the rain
In the mist of it all
Tryin to figure out
What went wrong 
How did she end up
With so much grief
Why was she left in the rain
With all of this pain

Here she stands in the rain
Wondering why
She has no friends
No dad
Just a mom and siblings
Why her
Why all this pain

Here she stands in the rain
Waitin for a friend....

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Tyesha Ehigiator Date: 1/3/2009 10:53:00 PM Breana, this was beautifully written and delicately expressed, this brought tears to my eyes, It made me really think, that we are not alone suffering. So many of us are going through, and keeping it inside but it's best to let it out, so then you can start to heal. Breana you are so young and brave, I know adults that are afraid of revealing themselves, but anyone that writes with the passion that you do and expressing yourself with truth and all that is within, Is Truly Amazing....tyesha Login to Reply

Michaela Payne Date: 12/31/2008 10:16:00 AM Breana this is just heartbreaking, but beautifully expressed. you say exact;y whats on your heart, hiding nothing, I like that. Blessings, ~Michaela~ Login to Reply

Yasmin Ilahi Date: 12/31/2008 7:42:00 AM Aother grt one. Keep them coming. Login to Reply

Derrick Burton Date: 12/30/2008 9:02:00 PM beautiful, and thats no sooth saying when a young person can write and really is good. your getting better by the months. thank you for sharing Login to Reply

Lisa Cooper Date: 12/30/2008 8:02:00 PM very sad and poinant thank you for sharing such a lovely pen Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 12/30/2008 7:35:00 PM Breana this is a heart breaker - Keep your hopes up as they say it can only get better - God Bless, MJ Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 12/30/2008 5:46:00 PM Aww, this is so sad and lonely. Hope it is not about you. If it is, hang in there. Good things come to good people. Wishing you great joy in the new year. Love, Shar Login to Reply