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Here It Comes

Storm warning, record rain
Jet stream, El Nino waters 
Wind gusts and mudslides 






For Brian Strand's Poetry of the Noun contest

natural disastersnatureseasonshaiku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/15/2011 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Linda. Have a wonderful week and may you have baskets full of inspiration come your way. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/13/2011 5:04:00 PM

Congrats Linda on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. wonderful words to share with us all my friend with luv.. hope u are well and happy ...

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/21/2010 4:38:00 AM

Hi Linda! i see you snuk in alot of poems while I wasn't looking. I thought you were on vacation ...but it was me! (snuk past tense of sneak= sneak snaked snuk):) Your comment even has a great combo Epulaeryu/Haiku in it! And a good one...Maybe it's above -on to your others. Sure am glad to see you writing! Your friend Robert

Colleen Bono

Date: 2/2/2010 7:38:00 AM

Just wanted to stop and say hello.hope all is well with you.I placed in a couple contest.Ya me.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2010 7:58:00 PM

Terrific Haiku Linda ... very descriptive and awesome ... visual scene... enjoyed .. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/1/2010 1:50:00 AM

You've built the tension really well in this haiku, Linda--looking forward to reading more of your talented writes :) thanks as well for your comments on my poems :)

Elaine George

Date: 1/25/2010 9:26:00 AM

You paint a solid vivid image of that horrific event with this Haiku, Linda. thank you for sharing your poetic talent once again, and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2010 10:26:00 PM

Hey, this was pretty good, Linda. I guess I had missed it. You did very well with just nouns. It was not an easy challenge. Luv, andrea

Date: 1/24/2010 7:05:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for a creative perspective. The title is fitting for the poem. I see you joined our Soup family last month. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/24/2010 2:49:00 PM

Wishing you a great day.

Kim Hilliker

Date: 1/23/2010 11:02:00 PM

Well written Haiku. Enjoyed it!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/23/2010 3:00:00 PM

Sounds like Haiti, good writing enjoyed reading .

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/23/2010 12:22:00 PM

Hopefully not for real.I hate nature's fierce wheather.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/22/2010 4:01:00 PM

Excellent entry for Brian's contest, Linda. You have described well the scene on the US West Coast right now. Our prayers are well invested in asking that lives be spared during the awful mudslides we've seen on television. Outstanding haiku! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/21/2010 9:28:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry today Linda. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/21/2010 2:04:00 AM

This is a great poetry of the noun Haiku, Linda well expressing the developments of hazardous weather there. You have succeeded in putting the reader (at least me) on edge concerning the coming events with few words. Great! -Robert