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Here In the Valley

Never truly caring very much about verse and or writing Twas something that just happened one day a few years ago Pressed and stirred and shaken since then yet, growing weary And have been for quite awhile now; nothing joyful and no reward Tis but the same mundane moment; jade in gray.... Eyes cast within a shard of shattered glass; and where's the laugh!? Not in this place; as what could got twisted amid what should Have been but everything got lost and I grew tired and time Stayed the same; jack in the box as it always has been.... ********************************************************* ....“Here In the Valley” ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/1/2012 10:07:00 PM
Interesting!! :) Love the last line. Really cool one. ^^ Always, Laura
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Date: 5/1/2012 1:55:00 PM
A very personal piece...a "llanto" of sorts...effectively stated....
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