Her and My Senses

I heard our song the other day,
and it made me reminisce.
About your body in a negligee,
and the special way we used to kiss!

I was walking through a department store,
and caught a whiff of a certain perfume.
The memory of the smell was hard to ignore,
and I thought of all the freaky things we used to do in the bedroom!

Amazing how certain sounds and smells,
Can still stir intense emotions inside me.
Even the taste of caramel puts me back under her spell,
Which is like universal poetry!

The memories of her in my heart,
can still awaken my senses;
And since she's my eternal counterpart,
She'll always be able to weaken my defenses!


Wrote strictly for Frank Herrera's contest "Sounds and Smells"
Enjoyed Bro!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 10/26/2010 11:53:00 AM
Congrats on winning HM in contest......Luv/Best wishes...........Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/25/2010 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations Jimmy on your HM in Frank's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2010 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Jimmy
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Date: 10/21/2010 3:41:00 PM
Cogratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/21/2010 2:37:00 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your HM in Frank's contest with this wonderful write .. enjoy your special honor tonight my friend with luv...
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Date: 10/21/2010 1:50:00 PM
Good job Jimmy. Congratulations on your success with it. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/21/2010 1:12:00 PM
Very nice indeed, Jimmy. Congratulations on your success in Frank's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:44:00 PM
awwww Jimmy this really is lovely ... thanks for your very kind comment and excusing my ramble I dont do it often lol just went the mood takes me ... will had you to facebook :) love and hugs Jayne p.s good luck in the competition :)
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Date: 10/18/2010 3:48:00 PM
JAM, this should do well in the contest...Love the imagery...always enjoy...Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/18/2010 10:51:00 AM
very sensual write..lucky girl ! good luck in the contest..take care~Deb
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Date: 10/18/2010 10:46:00 AM
Veyr nice theme you have chosen for the theme of the contest, recollecting the memories of the eternal counterpart, Jimmy
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Date: 10/18/2010 9:23:00 AM
A wonderful entry Jimmy and reads like a winner already luv.. great rhyme sequences here and u connected all points of the contest theme..good luck always and forever .. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 10/18/2010 7:37:00 AM
good luck in the contest Jimmy, wonderful piece
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