Her

. Yessss her touch did move mine likes Her eyes entered mine depths Her lips caressed mine flesh Her promise filled the all of me

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Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 2/5/2013 12:28:00 AM

Lovely poem!

James Peranteau
Date: 6/3/2021 12:38:00 AM

A belated ty dear poet

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/20/2012 9:16:00 PM

yes you have been captured,lol,great write James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2012 11:46:00 PM

This is so nice. Very romantic, James!!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/16/2012 6:54:00 PM

I can certainly say you are receptive James, if that's the right word! I sense a steely resolve to mesmerize the captive here; probably a willing one too. As always, I don't think anyone can read your poetry without that rush of adrenalin!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/15/2012 4:38:00 PM

So romantic...Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/15/2012 2:08:00 PM

beauty and grace fill these lines James luv.. a treasure to read and cherish for lovers and others.. very intense with passions flow .. hope u and Noah are well .. we are at beach for Summer luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/15/2012 11:57:00 AM

ahh, trust James to come up with an awesome piece like this.. I just love the ending too ;) enjoy the weekend, love Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/15/2012 10:49:00 AM

enchanting, james.. like " the all of me.."..:) charmed!..:) huggs!