Her

not a night goes by
without her smile
her laughter, her dancing eyes
drifting languidly
through the sea of my mind
riding the waves of my psyche
en route to the isle of my heart
a paradise lost
a fire rekindled from her spark
blue crush
hot lust
volcanic ecstasy
creating new spaces
to love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 5/10/2009 12:00:00 PM
Awesome and passionate. I like and enjoyed reading it. Ernilando
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Date: 4/29/2009 12:06:00 PM
'Creating new spaces to love' is a perfect reminder that the heart always has room, if we let it. Kat x
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Date: 4/25/2009 1:59:00 PM
Someone's got to you. Awesome write expressing memory of love's passion and magic. Enjoying your poetry very much. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/23/2009 12:13:00 PM
This is amazing dear Brian, so much love and devotion, how wonderful it is to rekindle a union with a past love, to know that those flames are still burning hot! Great piece!
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Date: 4/23/2009 9:52:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Brian! True love evokes all of these feelings.
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