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Each day being a luxury,able to switch on our t.v. sets taking for granted to turn on the tap and being able to get one of lifes simple natures,that could mature the dried soil and it is a crying shame,to see the starving children boil. Thousands desend each day,upon a makeshift clinic why can`t governments shine light,instead of being cynics one Dr to the weak and dying,can`t move,fly infested faces what is wrong with the world,please help these places. Personally speaking,and many more will feel the guilt on overindulgance,when leaving half a meal what a starving person would do,to step into your shoes even though we think of it,we havn`t got a clue. .

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Date: 8/13/2011 3:38:00 AM
Amen to that mate, Awesome good write right on the mark, We have to learn to love and help each other or we are all doomed....with love...old Jack
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/13/2011 7:07:00 AM
Thanks Old Jack,plain and simple innit ? Blessings.
Date: 8/8/2011 11:25:00 PM
Nice, welcome to the Soup
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/2/2011 1:13:00 PM
Thanks alot .. Blessings from Paul
Date: 8/8/2011 3:42:00 PM
Tears came to my eyes reading your poem, Paul. Same thing happens when I see the pictures of starving children. If each of us would just donate the price of one meal, we could make a difference. There are many who overindulge thoughtlessly, but I clean my plate, meager as its offerings might be. Beautifully written. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2011 11:26:00 PM
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/8/2011 5:57:00 PM
Thanks alot for the positive comment,Carolyn. I have been wanting to post this poem for a while,but each time the site`s been down. Yes £5 -$5 from every able person in the world would lift the black cloud from the unfortunate ones who have to endure this horrible life..blessings love, Paul.

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