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from hell pain hammers pounding in the head casting dark shadows steel cold deep dressed in black to the crossroads walking in the dark valley eyes lead heavy waterfalls aches in the soul in a forsaken place secluded reserved in pain piercing pounds for aching guests in no man's land a zombie between the living and dead in silent screaming words a desert of barren emptiness echoes comes alive loathing craving the soul is imprisonment taking a walk through the mind pulling back the cobwebs without escape confused bends in shapes now the thunder roars distorted visions twisted feelings emotions swells cursed in the deep the spirit lightning strikes power within the brain in dark pain i yield unto the light the soul speaks with voices of the spirits thundering in the mountains as god sent my guardian recovers the heart tainted with love stronger in fighting silken feelings i now stand at the crossroads a gladiator of light i survived a battle in hell

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Date: 9/5/2013 6:08:00 PM
Yes, I am definitely standing at the crossroads between heaven and hell. Waiting for a guardian angel to save me, and show me the way...And, hopefully my path will not lead me to hell....I have a poem that I have not posted yet, titled "Somebody Save Me". It is about this very subject. I may not post it until tomorrow....Amazing imagery in this poem. Fantastic work!
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Date: 9/3/2013 11:40:00 PM
Thought provoking write my friend. I really enjoyed this one also.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/4/2013 7:24:00 AM
THANK YOU DEEPLY MY OLD FRIEND BEAUTIFUL COMMENT GREATLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/3/2013 8:10:00 PM
At crossroads..Each one of us is there everynow and then..In hope of picking the right path after battles in hell-Highwsy to.heaven-Cause life is what we make it.One chapter of our life can t ruin the whole book.Your verses makes me ponder so much re life
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/3/2013 8:41:00 PM
like an angel you say such beautiful words touching maybe the path is being chosen as angels appear in my life slowly defeating the darkness a light appears out of nowhere a change i begin talking beautiful again paths they change everyday its the goal post one aims for holding golden mittens in the hands a treasure beautiful
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/3/2013 8:11:00 PM
Highway

Book: Shattered Sighs