Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

held within wings

liam mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled held within wings which was written by poet liam mcdaid. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by liam mcdaid

Best Liam Mcdaid Poems

+ Fav Poet

held within wings

a blanket 
begins unfolding
treading on dreams
softly a mist
begins creeping
in the soul
without shadows
echoes falling silent

walking without colour
in a distant fog
i see the sunshine
glistening dew
upon leaves
cherry lips
blossoming red
sparkling in essence
something beautiful

tears begin
falling deeply
shed in happiness
how much 
it all means
touching love
one soul
is the butterfly
within wings
folding them around
your heart

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 10/15/2013 9:13:00 AM
    Soft beautiful imagery <3

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 6:50:00 PM
    wow...this one is perfectly the images, the flow, and the meaning....gorgeous poem! a fav for sure!

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 5:24:00 PM
    'Walking without colour in a distant fog' What a great line. You write beautiful poetry Liam...Thanks for the read....Peter

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 5:00:00 PM
    One soul is the butterfly within wings folding them around your heart-My favourite lines of all the above exceptional verses.Very romamtic

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 3:36:00 PM
    A pleasure to read as always my old pal. Lovely work.

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 3:08:00 PM
    A beautiful image comes to mind, and you as the recipient, lovely verse Liam xxx

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 2:52:00 PM
    - Liam, always a pleasures to read your poems, this is beautiful and touching! - Thank you ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)