Heavy Halloween

*Heavy Halloween 

Atlanta 1997, my first visit to America I recall
I went with a friend called joyous Jessica 
With no real intention of “dressing up” at all 
But to see and know what Halloween is after all.
There came a beautiful girl Iris and asked me
If I wanted my face to be painted for Halloween play.
Nodding I consented, I don’t know why till today
She painted my face as nothing in particular to see.

Ah, the experience of looking into her eyes blue
Touching her alluring body almost to the full
And she touched my heart while she painted
It was the beginning of relationship wonderful 
What a sweetheart! What a heavy Halloween fool!
Wherever you’re, Iris, with love I’m still painted.

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Heavy meaning wonderful

Dr. Ram Mehta
Fifth Place win in:
Contest: Holiday hearth by Linda-Marie, the sweetheart of the PS

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/19/2011 8:49:00 AM
A very moving poem, congrats on your win too. Thank you for your kind words. Jodie
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Date: 11/18/2011 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Holiday Hearth" contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2011 1:24:00 PM
Congrats Doc., on ur well-deserved win. good poem.~O.O.
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Date: 11/16/2011 6:30:00 PM
A fun entry and memory. Congratulations on your win. Dr. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/16/2011 5:28:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your success in my contest with this amazing entry and thankxx for your support of my endeavors ...luv..
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Date: 11/8/2011 7:19:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today Dr. Rahm! ---Lori
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