Heaven Bound Love

As the river crests so flows our love.
You fit my life just like a glove.

In awesome wonder I watch your face.
so handsome and so full of grace.

The dazzle of that smile spins me
into a state of urgency.

Pleasing you is my only desire.
So darling stoke this blazing fire.

To find you took an eternity.
And now your kisses set me free.

Together sweet we'll travel on
until this troubled world is gone.

And when our story here is done
we'll walk each other to the sun.

Heaven-bound this very night
off we'll soar into the light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/20/2013 9:31:00 PM
You're quite the talent Deb. I've been reading your poems in the order that they appear and I can tell you that I've enjoyed each one so far. Sorry that I haven't commented on each one so take this as a blanket praise for all of them. Thanks for sharing with us. Rockman :-)
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Date: 1/13/2013 1:05:00 PM
Delightful to read. A poem of two very much in love. Have a lovely evening Deb :)
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Date: 1/10/2013 12:19:00 PM
It`s simply beautiful!
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Date: 1/10/2013 11:45:00 AM
Wow, this is so very incredible my friend! I am amazed with the way you presented this delightful poem, so perfectly smooth! Your rhyme and rhythm is wonderful and I am lifted to great heights within this masterful poem Deb! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/10/2013 3:34:00 AM
A golden gem, Deb - It's just gorgeous! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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