Heather

Heather Why can’t you see? We belong together Take a look in my direction. Is there anyone who can love you more? I want you to take a good look. To me, you’re everything. Listen to me Heather

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2012 6:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this excellent piece Robert. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/4/2012 3:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Robert, well done, and for all your recent wins in case I have missed any xxooxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/3/2012 9:46:00 PM

ROBERT, Congratulations with your wonderful entry IN Olajide Adelana CONTEST ;-) well done~ALWAYS PD*

David Williams

Date: 3/3/2012 1:48:00 PM

Robert congrats on your Hm..David

Kash Poet

Date: 3/3/2012 12:46:00 PM

Very good use of the form.Congrats Robert on your HM.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/25/2012 11:03:00 AM

Another romantic write Robert! I love that you are doing these Rictameters, they are such fun! I haven't done one for so long, I need to try some more! Great Work!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2012 10:37:00 AM

I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Robert. Love, Carol

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/25/2012 4:27:00 AM

Nice poem...Rictameter?? hmmmm...that's a new one for me. I'll have to check out the form.

Spandan Karmakar

Date: 1/25/2012 2:15:00 AM

A wonderful poem by you Robert really loved reading it......spandan