Hearts Desire

The desires of our hearts twained tenderly,
found soaring upon a warm ocean breeze,
Where love is found in bloom,as sweet seedlings 
 spun  dreams upon looms -- Yes, weaver's weaves.

Our hearts dared dream of such pleasantries groomed,
within this place where none ear shall turn 'way ~
from golden lyrics drawn of lover's moon
Oh, that each mellow verse could last always...

Once, we have danced beneath star filled skies
 we shall watch the dawning of morning sun
drinking of its glory we'll share a sigh,
knowing, the early bird's yet too have sung...

No sweeter song's yoked between you and I
for you shall always be my Valentine...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 11/17/2010 11:28:00 PM
Amazing sonnet! Love the images and the way you brought them to life. You have romance down to a science. Great Work!
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Date: 6/7/2010 11:19:00 PM
This is such a sweet sonnet, that speaks so much love for your Valentine, Adell :) Really enjoyed the metaphors that you used here--it brings such romantic images to mind--thank you as well for your gracious comments on my writes :) glad you enjoyed them--have a fun day! --nikko :)
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Date: 4/7/2010 6:13:00 AM
Extremely beautiful sonnet, dear Adell. Love, lainie
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Date: 3/31/2010 10:58:00 AM
The Lovliest Sentiments Expressed Here ... The Vocabulary Just Pulls Reader Into A Dream-Spun Imagery Of Joy and A Moment ... Wonderful Write On Romance ... MoonBee
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Date: 2/17/2010 5:53:00 AM
Great Valentine Sonnet, Adell! Thank you for sharing it with us and thank you for your comment..Keep writing! All the best...Gert
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Date: 2/6/2010 2:34:00 PM
What a sweet valentine sonnet, Adell!
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Date: 2/4/2010 1:39:00 PM
You have me smiling with this poem. Thanks for the day brightener. Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 2/4/2010 1:28:00 PM
sweetly said. john h lovingiii
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Date: 1/30/2010 10:59:00 AM
Great Valentine's poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/27/2010 6:24:00 AM
Was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Adell. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2010 7:25:00 PM
Ah...that was a moving poem. Enjoyed the read.
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