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Heart Song

I hear the rhythm beneath your breast, music of intense emotion, with a volume of such depth, it bypasses my ears to enter my mind, which interprets for my heart and tears fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/18/2008 5:36:00 AM
This is beautiful, Nigel. I love the line "music of intense emotion". Very passionate and moving write. Glad you liked the sonnet. My second attempt. Plan on doing more with that lovely form. Love Robin
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Date: 11/17/2008 4:16:00 PM
I love the poem's entirety. It is a nice nonet...Raul
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Date: 11/17/2008 7:58:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem. I would like for our editorial board to have the opportunity to consider it for Blue Fog Journal’s “Contemporary Romantic Love Poems” anthology. If you are interested please review the submission guidelines at the following link: http://bluefogjournal.com/call-for-submission/. Sincerely, ED COET Editor, Blue Fog Journal
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Date: 11/17/2008 4:43:00 AM
A very moving nonet Nigel.
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Date: 11/17/2008 12:37:00 AM
very nice Nigel on this Nonet. Love is in the air. Michael Torres
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Date: 11/16/2008 5:41:00 PM
Lovely nonet Nigel! I liked it a great deal, so many emotions are well fed. Take care, Chitra
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Date: 11/16/2008 12:58:00 PM
A very touching nonet, I have come to lie this form. :) Excellent content for the form, love K
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Date: 11/16/2008 11:21:00 AM
You are so talented..I hope your tears will grow a peony. ( Karen O'Leary's post today. BG
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