Heart Shaped Stone

How plain it looks in morning sun
I hold it by the window's light, and palm it once again
It stirs my heart with tenderness, now fondly mixed with memories
A rock as smooth, as silk, as glass…, this heart shaped stone he gave to me
And with a kiss that could not last, one brief repast 
         One timeless loss                             
                    ... of what could never be…., 
                             
I was late to bloom, a quiet girl, long dark hair, and I blushed with ease
He sat behind in science class, would poke some fun, and loved to tease
He'd pull my pony tail, and then beg for the answers to a test
He called me “Squirt”…….and to the rest...
   he’d say, “Bug off!”…if some new jerk would dare to taunt or bother me
His eyes were dark, his skin was fair, his Lettered jacket had a flair
A flirt he was,  but much too fast, especially for a girl like me
Considered cool….I was quite out-classed, but I must confess....my love was real

He lived far down our country road, his family owned a big ranch home
His Jeep sped daily by our house,  much too fast,...much too fast...
Too much privilege, has a price. Oh...you know, .... the spoiled kind
My parents often said as much...
“Don’t look too hard!” “Don’t be inclined!  He's much too fast...much too fast"...

Beneath the cool, his smooth talk play,
   a gentle way he treated me, 
      He had a tender smile for me.....it was sincere...I knew it then
        I know it now.....and all the while I believed in him
        Although, he wore a false disguise...a macho side,  for all the guys

One day when I was on my horse, not far from home, 
he drove on by and then, of course 
he stopped to talk, we laughed, he smiled
I tied my mare, he left his Jeep, we took a walk along the street 
So cold, then rain,... came unprepared, he shared his coat, 
and the leather scent would fill the air

Beneath our feet, he saw the rock, a muted-colored  heart shaped stone
He gave me. then, a quiet look, and took my hand…
Into my fist, he put the stone, and on my lips….a gentle kiss

We never spoke of it again.  Remember,... he was cool,.. back then….   

                                                       ~
The days went by, and we would grow, and years would find us worlds apart
But then, such awful news to know......

   He sped too fast, ………….around a bend
   And there, the story ends

Sweet scent of leather, lasts forever
It reminds me now,  of something sweet
Reminding me,  of never,     never...

                   some things aren't meant to be....
                                      

               





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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 7/4/2013 12:09:00 AM
nice.........SKAT
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Date: 6/29/2013 5:35:00 AM
Wow! Brilliant and moving. Loved it. Congrats on your win. Definitely deserved first place!
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Date: 6/28/2013 3:34:00 PM
A bittersweet and heartfelt poem you wrote here. Nicely done Carrie. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/26/2013 2:16:00 PM
I liked all the repetition making us feel as if the verse was a fleeting glimpse as his life was fleeting, both of ours were very James Dean in their own way! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/26/2013 11:54:00 AM
this is truly heartfelt and well crafted, carrie.. congrats on your shining win and more cheers to the many other recent awards... you are no.1.. :) huggs
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your HM in Dana'lynn's "The Secondhand Emotion" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 10:05:00 PM
touching write i have to say, you got me in, with your words in play, and the saddest ending, yet i say , you are a sweet delight...
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Date: 1/16/2012 9:04:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Awesome piece. Nice going. Enjoyed. luv Ralph
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Date: 1/16/2012 5:00:00 PM
how beautiful a story, Carrie. You wrote it expertly and I was glued to it...every line. congratulations to you
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Date: 1/16/2012 3:04:00 PM
well here we two are in stage left .. couldn't find better company to be in the wings with HM [hot mama] Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place win Carrie in Frank Herrera's contest "First Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2011 2:53:00 PM
Wonderful IS an overused word, you always bring me with you my Adonis died at 35 heart attack leaving a wife and 2 small children, one, the boy was dieing too of cancer, I always felt he went first to be there when the child passed. So sad dieing so young both of them. Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2011 12:38:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your 1st place win in this contest.Enjoyed your poem---kashinath
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:31:00 AM
Super Congrats Carrie on your 1st place win.Knew this would top the winners list.A lovely piece of poetry...Love, Gautami
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Date: 4/16/2011 3:25:00 AM
oh, how you nailed me, carrie, wow... roaring cheesr for the 1st spot in this contest.. well-deserved! :) huggs!
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Date: 4/15/2011 6:30:00 PM
This pulled so hard at my heart-strings, I thought they would break. Absolutely sensational story and sensational writing, Carrie. Congratsulations on your FIRST PLACE win. Love, Lainie
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Date: 4/15/2011 5:35:00 PM
This one gave me goose bumps. So sweet and so sad. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:31:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in Frank's contest with this excellent entry and expression ... enjoy another wonderful win well deserved top spot with luv..
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Date: 4/15/2011 3:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/10/2011 2:13:00 PM
Deeply touching.. a love so divine,you have penned it with such beautiful tender emotions Carrie.Love to you and best wishes,you are a winner..Gautami eenssssssssssssss
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Date: 4/10/2011 6:08:00 AM
Touchy and moving tale of romance and first kiss..into my fist, he put the stone and on my lips a tender kiss. memorable verse, Carrie
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Date: 4/9/2011 10:05:00 PM
a very heart breaking and sad piece you wrote here.
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Date: 4/9/2011 6:02:00 PM
Oh, Carrie, how sad to lose someone special like this. I bet you kept that heart-shaped stone as a reminder of this warm and tender moment you shared. Frank will be blown away by the beauty of this poem, just as I was. No need to wish you luck -- talent speaks for itself. I'll look for your poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/9/2011 1:42:00 PM
That was a terrific heartbreak..Enjoyed reading your alluring story..Got my attention and held it..Good luck in the contest with this excellent work..Sara
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