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Heart Attack

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Heart Attack

Breathless gasps 
Agonizing spasms
Ice-cold sweat beads
Fingers clutch a fading heart, palpitating with grief
In a moment, the rapacious pain recedes
Burdened by scorn and disbelief
Fingers unclasp as the beads disperse
As the pressure ascends to give way to relief
Vows of friendship relinquish their crown to deceit
Don’t reminisce… you’ll risk an arduous repeat

                            Betrayal… a lifelong heart attack

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  1. Date: 8/29/2009 9:29:00 AM
    This is a wonderful, awesome… poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 5:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 1:03:00 PM
    Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 10:31:00 AM
    "In a moment, the rapacious pain recedes/ Burdened by scorn and disbelief"...great image, Dima. Congratulations on being featured this week! Good job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 8:20:00 AM
    Dima,..wow,..great description,..congats on tis feature this week !! james

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 8:13:00 AM
    Ah you got me! My heart skipped when I read the last line. Congratulations on being featured - awesome work.

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 3:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dima. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/24/2009 2:21:00 AM
    congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 8:29:00 AM
    Had one once ... I understand. Thanks for the lessons in symptoms. Peace and love