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Healthy Choice

Eat salad at Mickey-D's? Such a healthy choice If only I could stay strong And resist the smell Of burger and fries carbs and fat Darn! Fast Food Epulaeryu contest 4/30/11

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/7/2011 7:00:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/7/2011 2:34:00 AM

savoring tis with funm, barbara.. congrats on the high win! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2011 8:50:00 PM

barbara, I have been noticing that many of the winners are burgers. And yours is a cute approach to them! Congratulations on your win!

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 5/6/2011 3:24:00 PM

Good job. Congrats

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/6/2011 2:39:00 PM

Your will power is strong, dear LNC. I would have a hard time resisting, but I've lost 15 pounds now as I live on V-8 and Lean Cuisine or Healthy Choice meals. Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 5/6/2011 1:35:00 PM

LOL I know that feeling! Many congrats on your win, Barbara : )

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 5/6/2011 12:56:00 PM

The smell is just too tempting! Great win xx

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/6/2011 12:11:00 PM

That's next to impossible, but well as they say it's the thought that counts. a nice one. Congrats on your win Barbara. Love, gautami

Kash Poet

Date: 5/6/2011 12:01:00 PM

Lovely write .Congrats Barbara on your win.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/6/2011 5:37:00 AM

Great stuff here, Barbara! You are absolutely correct that it's all in the resistance of the aroma!! Have a great weekend--enjoy'd this write!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/5/2011 9:09:00 PM

Dear Barbara, YOU are on a roll, I think I Will see YOUR name in the Winners Circle For the next Couple of Weeks " SUPERB " With LOVE FOREVER AND ALWAYS...HG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2011 12:35:00 PM

You have to be strong to resist the smell of burgers and fries, dear LNC. Clever poem! As one who has been living on "Healthy Choice" and "Lean Cuisine" for a month now, your poem has special meaning for me. I will try again to make phone contact. Love, Carolyn

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 5/5/2011 9:27:00 AM

It's hard to resist temptation, but do, McDonalds is disgusting though it smells good so don't give in LOL Perfect in form and I can hear the frustration. Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2011 4:50:00 PM

Oh, I SO know this feeling, Barbara. yes, who can resist??? Good poem.