Headache

head pounds all around noise echos inside and out must find quiet space

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/5/2013 7:35:00 AM

I know the feeling, I get migraines. I have a bedroom in my house with no windows and sometimes when it gets really bad the darkness helps. Great poem. Thanks so much for hosting a great contest, I enjoyed it and am honored you chose my poem. If you have a chance read my "Title Wave" it is also inspired by you but was to long for the contest.

Adam Hapworth
Date: 9/6/2013 7:18:00 AM

I'm lucky not to get migraines or headaches that often but that day thunder outside and thundering voices of rambunctious children inside just made it ring. Glad you enjoyed the contest :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/4/2013 9:34:00 AM

Nice expressions