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He took her hand to help her understand he was her man He showed her love and helped her with the wedding plans She was lucky but sad because he was a military man Always going here and there But he left her signs showing that he cares like In his words In his actions In his plans and Like when he took her hand he touched her heart From the first day they met it was easy and not hard For him to get her heart beating as she would Lose her breath each and every time she would take a step closer to him And she would give in to that smile As she felt like a little child Like when he would Whisper softly to her such beautiful “I love you’s” And she would say shyly I do to…..

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Date: 7/28/2012 1:49:00 PM
....as in a fairy tale....well written Jane. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Jane Kostman
Date: 7/30/2012 11:02:00 AM
thank you for your comment! jane xoxo
Date: 7/26/2012 3:57:00 PM
Great work about a situation that is common today(that is men and women having to go away to serve their tour of duty)..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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Jane Kostman
Date: 7/28/2012 12:53:00 PM
thank you hope to see ya around more jane xoxo

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