He

He took her hand to help her understand he was her man
He showed her love and helped her with the wedding plans
She was lucky but sad because he was a military man
Always going here and there
But he left her signs showing that he cares like
In his words
In his actions
In his plans and 
Like when he took her hand he touched her heart
From the first day they met it was easy and not hard 
For him to get her heart beating as she would 
Lose her breath each and every time she would take a step closer to him
And she would give in to that smile
As she felt like a little child
Like when he would
Whisper softly to her such beautiful “I love you’s” 
And she would say shyly I do to…..

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Date: 7/28/2012 1:49:00 PM
....as in a fairy tale....well written Jane. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Jane Kostman
Date: 7/30/2012 11:02:00 AM
thank you for your comment! jane xoxo
Date: 7/26/2012 3:57:00 PM
Great work about a situation that is common today(that is men and women having to go away to serve their tour of duty)..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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Date: 7/28/2012 12:53:00 PM
thank you hope to see ya around more jane xoxo
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