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Hate

Do you hear my silent cries? Or do you set me to the side? For in my mind the black bird flies, In the Darkness of my mind For each breath you take, For each word you speak, I slowly grow in hate For you, is who, my Darkness seek Do you hear my scream of hate, Just wanting you to die? For now I wait, for you fate, In the Darkness of my mind!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/24/2011 9:54:00 AM
I really liked your poem. I can relate to the feelings. Nice job,
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Date: 10/21/2011 6:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Andrew
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2011 10:47:00 PM
Ooooh nice job, Andrew! Did you really feel anger while writing this poem? I could feel it when I read your poem! X)
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Date: 10/11/2011 5:21:00 PM
love your poem titled hate can relate to those words, keep up the good work you do!!
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Date: 8/28/2011 12:46:00 AM
I'm so proud of you! Keep it up. New chapter in your life, new things to write about.
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:56:00 AM
Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper Andrew. Thank you for sharing your writing with us as I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Love, Carol
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