Hate

H ate is a nasty word A lmost often used to hurt T ry forgiveness being E vil Evolves Emptiness

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/29/2010 9:22:00 PM

so powerful in such a small poem. if one holds a grudge to the point where it is pointless, and then all they show is anger to hide what they want and that they trul want to forgive, they just don't know how.and thats why they are empty and feel so cold.great meaning in this one. -Always&Forever Lynette

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/16/2010 3:53:00 AM

Excellent writing, Faleshia. I especially like the last line. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Holly Harlan

Date: 3/13/2010 7:53:00 AM

I love it! Very well done

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/12/2010 8:49:00 PM

Now ain't that just the truth, Faleshia. I guess we all get into it sometimes but it sure is a hurtful thing. Good acrostic with message.-Robert

Royal Trevino

Date: 3/12/2010 2:23:00 PM

all you wrote is true.. enjoyed

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/12/2010 11:39:00 AM

NICE.... My favorite form, The Acrostic..... I have many types.... Acrostic & End- line, Double-sided Acrostic, Etc....... Great job my friend.....:JP]