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Harmony

She sat, curved over the high red wall, the rain fat about her face and shoulders and straining off her naked toes like liquid fire. She sang, waterlogged as her breath or bare skin, her lips heavy with meaning and her lashes with faith, and her hips engraving themselves in ridges like stutters as her notes drenched the sky right back – fell through worlds into his hungry mouth as he screamed prayers from his knees in the dark. discordant melodies, all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/12/2009 6:37:00 AM
I love how you describe the rain as fat. I've never heard anyone explain rain like that before...just...so...epic. "waterlogged as her breath or bare skin" such an amazing line, it sounds so hideous, like Ophelia but also so fresh like a newborn. You quite simple boggled my mind, good lady :) Love ya, hope you're ok. Bugsay x
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Date: 9/4/2009 11:15:00 AM
I am so happy to be reading your excellent poetry today Micaela. I thank you for sharing it here at the Soup. Love, Carol
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