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Happy Snail Trails

. lowly beachcomber probing for minuscule snacks plentiful low tide

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/25/2010 7:41:00 AM

Love the haiku as well as the title, Mitch! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2010 8:53:00 PM

Hey, I see I am not the only one who was wondering what the heck that thing was. I too ended up calling it a beachcomber!! however I gave a title that may have shot myself in the foot! I like yours. congrats.Andrea

Date: 4/24/2010 4:23:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Congratulations on your fourth place finish in Raul's contest. Way to go! Keep on writing. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/24/2010 1:40:00 PM

Congrats Mitch on your winning poem in the Journey contest... perfect words to feature the photo..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/24/2010 1:38:00 PM

Hey Mitch, my congratulations on this fantastic Haiku!! Enjoy your win! Peace, Audrey

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2010 4:30:00 AM

yes goes real good with the picture..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/24/2010 3:31:00 AM

Great interpertation of the picture...Should do well in the contest..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara