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Happy Birthday

Your birthday in knocking on the door Time to air some candles out You need a new one today Well that’s no cause to pout Be sure to thank the Lord each day To give you enough strength To blow that new one out Happy Birthday!!!! By- Tahera Mannan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/4/2012 9:57:00 AM
A real 7+, as for me too! Congratulations for your 1st place. I's a pleasure to read such light and witty poetry. Love, Hanitra
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Date: 10/3/2012 2:49:00 PM
hahaha. I LOVE it!!!
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Date: 10/2/2012 1:33:00 PM
Tahera, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD
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Date: 10/2/2012 7:35:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your big win in the contest!Love it.
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Date: 10/1/2012 9:38:00 PM
Very nice tribute to Debbie. Well done. Lee
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Date: 10/1/2012 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2012 5:37:00 AM
a happy read, tahera... super congrats on your win!.:)
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Date: 9/30/2012 9:53:00 PM
BIG CONGRATULATIONS FRIEND TAHERA FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^)
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Date: 9/30/2012 5:20:00 PM
Delightful Tahera...Congratulations! Cynthia
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Date: 9/30/2012 1:41:00 PM
Big congrats Tahera xx
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Date: 9/30/2012 12:28:00 PM
Thank you from the bottom of me heart. Light & Love
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:53:00 PM
Thanks a ton deb.Love you.
Date: 9/21/2012 4:36:00 PM
If you need a permit from the local fire marshal to light the candles on your birthday cake, then you are too old. Good write for the contest.
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Date: 9/18/2012 7:49:00 AM
nice write Tahera..good luck to the contest :)
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Date: 9/18/2012 5:22:00 AM
like this Tahera, the message really is so profound in this poem...
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Date: 9/18/2012 3:11:00 AM
Fun poem. I especially like the line. "Time to air some candles out." Very witty. Nice job.
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Date: 9/18/2012 2:32:00 AM
Always thankful each time I wake up on the right side of the dirt. Excellent piece.
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Date: 9/18/2012 12:44:00 AM
Haha..enjoyed the touch of humour in this beautiful poem Tahera!Best wishes to you.
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