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Below is the poem entitled happiness? which was written by poet ryan mcneil. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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it takes a mind to write a poem
sometimes more than one

searching for hours,

looking for accolades, from maybe another time

a pat on the back, things will be fine

nothing looks better now






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  1. Date: 2/7/2010 4:10:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 4:26:00 PM
    Welcome to the Soup, Ryan. Hope you'll grow and inspire with your poems! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 12/31/2009 11:28:00 AM
    ~~Ryan~~Now you are winding down your year (2009 ) of sharing your amazing poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. As you begin your New Year (2010 ) I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I wish you good health, all the love your heart can take and peace in your life. Love and blessings to you and yours now and always, Carol

  1. Date: 12/30/2009 2:12:00 PM
    Good write..a profound thought & perhaps keep looking? Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/30/2009 12:02:00 PM
    As accolades can lay you in the shade, or say you've made the grade. By which many sometimes fade, as laid in the shade. Smile! Great thought in your poem, Ryan. Thanks for comment. Welcome to soup. Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 12/30/2009 10:05:00 AM
    Nice write there, great ending. To find accolades we must give them in return! Luv, andrea