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Hank's Pentameter

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Hank's Pentameter

back-alley barroom
scratchy, juke box 45's 
'so lonesome' Hank moans

("I'm So Lonesome I Could Cry" by Hank Williams)
For Susan's Single Senryu contest

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  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:40:00 PM
    Great winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 9:40:00 AM
    Awesome Tim...congratulations

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 11:03:00 AM
    Glad to see this again Tim--Kudos!

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 8:48:00 PM
    BIG congrats, Tim. You deserve it! I just love that song!!

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:41:00 PM
    Tim, enjoyed your senryu. Congrats!! In Susan's contest... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:31:00 PM
    lol, a favorite tune of mine, you capture the place very well, Tim, congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 4:23:00 PM
    You got the idea Cher, emotion! & wit ;) Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Congratulations Tim.

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 11:12:00 AM
    Spend a lot of time there, do you?? Put a few quarters in for me.....I would like "Cold Cold Heart" ! :) Congrats!!

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 9:59:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning place Tim xx

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Ah, the good ole days. Good luck in the contest, Tim. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 11:28:00 AM
    Those were (not) the days.

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 6:16:00 AM
    Good one Tim--I like the BJ Thomas version circa 1966.

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 2:28:00 PM
    I enjoy the mood of this one, my friend!!

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 1:32:00 PM
    i like the the movement, tone and overall feel to this awesome write!.. music for my soul, tim...quite extraordinary!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 12:54:00 PM
    - Good old juke box ...... (with music that really was music ...) - Well done, Tim!!!! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)