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Hanging in There

Over the hill, Though still her beauty resounding Over the hill, As seven notes of music thrill, The seventh beauty astounding, Seven of ten still abounding, Over the hill, In 'Light of Love, Replenish, finish and refine, In 'Light of Love, Fits aptly in Guzzi glove, Poetess is one of a kind, My patience tried by every line, In 'Light of Love, Dedicated to Debbie Guzzi, still a lovely lady, tho I believe she has admitted she is past 60. Happy sailing Debbie. Agape, Moses

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  1. Date: 2/28/2014 11:31:00 AM
    Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 8:57:00 AM

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 4:30:00 PM
    and fitting to this lovely lady.

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 1:41:00 PM
    john, how i miss you...hope everything is good; such a lovely poem for debbie.. selah and huggs

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 8:06:00 PM
    So much talent in your writing. You should get published as you as so so talented! Thank you for sharing your poetry. You are a refined writer and reading your poetry is very moving. Keep up the great art.

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 12:07:00 AM

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 5:00:00 PM
    John, stopping by with a happy mother's day wish...Linda

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 1:37:00 PM
    hey, now here is one I never saw before!! I take it she is a December baby then? Very sweet dedication for her. It was cool to see you today!

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 1:45:00 PM
    Look left of the page My inboxes click on that .

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 12:56:00 PM
    Soup mail

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 3:12:00 PM
    in less that 200 hours i'll be in my fifties. ansd yes she is a lovely lady and a great poetess. john. working on your request.

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 9:26:00 PM
    Hello my old friend!...It's been a while hasn't it?...Fine poem written for a fine lady...She took me under her wing when I first joined PS and I will always be greatful...Would love to hear from you...Take care and God bless - Tim

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 9:07:00 AM
    very nice dedication to someone well deserving.its been awhile.hope you are doing well these days.take care

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 1:37:00 PM
    Quite a dedication to Debbie John, a Good reading piece here.."

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 6:39:00 PM
    John, a nice dedication... glad she enjoyed the poem..LINDA

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 10:22:00 PM
    Ohhh John thanks so much I needed that I'm afraid it's an old lonely night again!! Light & Love [Happy Trails to You Too]

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 8:38:00 PM
    Hey John...Nice to see you again! I'm sure Debbie will love it.Don't stay away so long next time.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:42:00 PM
    True beauty is eternal John, thanks for sharing xxxxR