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Hallway Heartbeats

This feeling for you is growing But nothing is worse than knowing The emotion I may be showing Is going to give me away I'm scared that you may be suspecting The dots you may be connecting When my emotions are disconnecting My hearts beats with no second delay Your attention becomes so addicting As I should have been predicting But my heart is very restricting It knows it gets hurt this way

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Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 12/9/2012 8:09:00 AM

Woow, dillematic love story, though this one really wonderfully described through your verses :D, thank you Jull for your visit to my page, your words really encouraging, and I'm glad that you like it too :)-Hug, Yanny

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/9/2012 7:50:00 AM

Deep piece from your soul ... The best place to write from.. very good.. Hugs n luv Michael

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/9/2012 6:12:00 AM

Love can be both rewarding and painful. I hope you find someone that is sensitive, thoughtful, and adoring. Wishing you the very best.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2012 4:58:00 AM

If it is meant to be, it will all work out..Get to know the man before getting deeply invovled is my advice to a young lady ......Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Joseph May

Date: 12/9/2012 4:24:00 AM

wonderful write Juli...

Dan Kearley

Date: 12/9/2012 12:03:00 AM

A nice write here Juli.. All I can say is..You only live once! And it's better to just find out how he feels before it's to late. I think? You will never know unless you try. :o)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 12/8/2012 11:02:00 PM

Rhyming well and connecting well, love this piece, friend!! Jag

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 12/8/2012 10:59:00 PM

Love is so pure, isn't it? First signs of love, dear friend. Just go with it. I heard someone said "one never ventures, never gains". Great poem. Love ya, Toquyen

Richard Palmer

Date: 12/8/2012 10:28:00 PM

your rhymes are sick too,love this piece,and I see you are aware of the facts of life,great write Juli,thanks for your comment it made my night,check out a few more,hope you become a fan lol

Juli- Michelle
Date: 12/8/2012 10:29:00 PM

Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/8/2012 10:18:00 PM

Hello Juli, hard to ignore certain heartbeats. you should go with the flow... and let him connect all the dots he wants... you never know he might like all he connects...always~ PD

Juli- Michelle
Date: 12/8/2012 10:31:00 PM

I will try. Thanks :)