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Halcyon Days

Do you remember way back, yester-year, and far off times when life had just begun? Of languid days, so free and debonair, all by the pool with friends and having fun? Those happy thoughts of Sue and Kate and Clare, their tummies tanned and torsos basking in the sun? And me? Do I recall this bright and carefree dawn? Oh no. You see, I wasn’t even born! ~ For nette onclaud's 'MOMENT IN ANOTHER TIME' Contest by Charles Clive.

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 1:24:00 AM
    Charles... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. goodnight. <3 =LINDA=

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 11:01:00 AM
    I love the idea because I do a lot of this sort of meditating myself. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 12:10:00 PM
    Looks like a decent ottava rima. Just one suggestion: have you considered replacing "dawn" in the seventh line with "morn"? It's your work. Just a little suggestion.

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    Date: 4/2/2012 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Much better! Thank you.