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Under the demure willow In my hammock just to brood Complete relaxation On my opulent lagoon Right outside my bungalow Grows plethora of the Moon Flower They are so lithe with beauty You could only dream of such a power Their elixir serves much eloquence To let go, and just release The stress of your emotions Let them halt and cease My place is one quite comely Here you’ll find relief You’ll hear susorrous in the wind As it whisks away your grief Take the essence of felicity Combined with natures bliss From the shore you’ll see my wafture As I blow a goodbye kiss WRITTEN ON: 03/03/2011 3:03 pm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/3/2011 10:21:00 PM
Congrats Randa on this poem making it to the first round competition in PS contest luv.. good luck...
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Date: 8/3/2011 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations!!!! This is a fantastic poem, and I wish you much success on making it beyond the first round of competition
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Miranda. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:00:00 AM
Butterfly, Congratulations on your poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/4/2011 9:05:00 AM
Beautiful imagery filled with fragrant lines Miranda.. lovely entry for John's contest ..good luck.. in the competition.. appreciate your very kind comment and making Resurrection one of your favs.. always keep my parents in mind for this type of poetry as well as my son who died at 5 months old.. luckily I have four more sons to keep me busy and happy as well as a loving hubbie almost one year now.. happy weekend..
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:47:00 AM
very good my friend
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Date: 3/3/2011 12:31:00 PM
WOW! Good lord this was nice, Miranda. Hell of an ending...
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