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Hail Mary

she steals money 
from the church collecting box - - 
Hail Mary

for Susan’s Senryu contest

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  1. Date: 3/17/2013 1:18:00 PM
    Poor Mary...LOL..I'm sure she must really need it! Great Senryu, Jack. Just spending a little time here today and I'm already enjoying your poems, my friend. x Annalise

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Single Senryu contest Jack. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:38:00 PM
    Lovely Jack, many congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 3:52:00 PM
    Mary is in deeep doo doo! hahaha...Congrats, Jack! Very smooooooth writing!

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:16:00 PM
    JACK, Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's "Single Senryu" contest. always, PD

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 12:39:00 PM
    A shocker and great example of senryu. Congratulations on another winner, Jack.Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 6:35:00 AM
    Jack,Congrats on your top win with this great senryu!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 10:37:00 PM
    congratulations :) well done!!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:11:00 PM
    well done, congratulations on your win. Always enjoy your poetry Jack. Lee

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 8:16:00 PM
    lovely write!! congratulations friend Jack!! cheers! **Maria**

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 5:55:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 4:45:00 PM
    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 2:13:00 PM
    wow, GREAT win for you, my friend. Congratulations. (I always loved this one)

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:44:00 PM
    Great job Jack!...this one is a real poser...I see several meanings here...guess that's what makes it good, huh? - Tim

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:20:00 PM
    excellent jack! you do not need the --which indicates a kireji or verbal caesura (cutting word), leading to a juxtaposed phrase which is not used in senryu [and is not actually there in your write ;), your content is excellent and has the necessary cynical and darkly humerous tone perfectly so proud to share the spot with YOU! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Brilliant Jack congratulations xx

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:00:00 PM
    I do not know whether I should laugh or feel sorry for the poor soul.... Congratulations on your 1st place win, Jack. Su

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 7:00:00 AM
    oh that is low....maybe she needs it ??? LOL

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 9:54:00 AM
    Hola, my friend Jack how are you today? and about your senryu.. wow.. hail who goes there. LOL... I hope her conscious speaks louder than her needs.. love it..pd

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 8:48:00 AM
    oh this is clever jack, one has to really ponder on this... awesome...